🗽 Comma or no comma with relative clauses 🗽
Boring, I know. But important.
Stop explaining the need for commas, or the lack thereof, with relative clauses with the help of "essential vs. non-essential information." This is not helpful. "Defining vs. non-defining" is probably more helpful. But, obviously, I have the most helpful explanation.
Everything hinges on whether there is one of something or more than one of something.
1️⃣ "My brother, who lives in New York, has three cats." I have one brother.
2️⃣ "My brother who lives in New York has three cats." I have more than one brother. One lives in New York. Another one(s) lives elsewhere.
3️⃣ "The entrance, which is located on the southern side, has been renovated." The place has one entrance.
4️⃣ "The entrance which is located on the southern side has been renovated." The place has more than one entrance. The entrance on the southern side has been renovated. The one located elsewhere hasn't.
So the meaning hinges on the comma, and the absence of the comma can create sentences that don't make sense. For example, "It reached 50,000 which was the highest recorded level." This sentence means there are more than one 50,000 marks: one was the highest level and one (or more than one) wasn't, which doesn't make sense.
More creative and context dependent uses:
5️⃣ Me talking to my students: "St Petersburg, where I live, is a gloomy place." I am Russian. Most of my students are Russian. I assume we all understand there is only one St Petersburg.
6️⃣ But I often badmouth St Petersburg because of its bad weather. So a student might get indignant and exclaim, "Well, the St Petersburg where I live is a nice, vibrant place." The meaning here is that, metaphorically speaking, there are two St Petersburgs, i.e. two perceptions of the city.
7️⃣ When I go to Florida, I might meet someone who lives in St Petersburg in this state. They might tell me, "St Petersburg is a cute little town." I might reply, "The St Petersburg where I live is neither cute nor little." There are two St Petersburgs, literally.
To sum up, what makes the information essential or non-essential and the clause defining or non-defining is whether there is only one or more than one of something.
Did this post make your head spin? This is not even an exhaustive explanation...
Boring, I know. But important.
Stop explaining the need for commas, or the lack thereof, with relative clauses with the help of "essential vs. non-essential information." This is not helpful. "Defining vs. non-defining" is probably more helpful. But, obviously, I have the most helpful explanation.
Everything hinges on whether there is one of something or more than one of something.
1️⃣ "My brother, who lives in New York, has three cats." I have one brother.
2️⃣ "My brother who lives in New York has three cats." I have more than one brother. One lives in New York. Another one(s) lives elsewhere.
3️⃣ "The entrance, which is located on the southern side, has been renovated." The place has one entrance.
4️⃣ "The entrance which is located on the southern side has been renovated." The place has more than one entrance. The entrance on the southern side has been renovated. The one located elsewhere hasn't.
So the meaning hinges on the comma, and the absence of the comma can create sentences that don't make sense. For example, "It reached 50,000 which was the highest recorded level." This sentence means there are more than one 50,000 marks: one was the highest level and one (or more than one) wasn't, which doesn't make sense.
More creative and context dependent uses:
5️⃣ Me talking to my students: "St Petersburg, where I live, is a gloomy place." I am Russian. Most of my students are Russian. I assume we all understand there is only one St Petersburg.
6️⃣ But I often badmouth St Petersburg because of its bad weather. So a student might get indignant and exclaim, "Well, the St Petersburg where I live is a nice, vibrant place." The meaning here is that, metaphorically speaking, there are two St Petersburgs, i.e. two perceptions of the city.
7️⃣ When I go to Florida, I might meet someone who lives in St Petersburg in this state. They might tell me, "St Petersburg is a cute little town." I might reply, "The St Petersburg where I live is neither cute nor little." There are two St Petersburgs, literally.
To sum up, what makes the information essential or non-essential and the clause defining or non-defining is whether there is only one or more than one of something.
Did this post make your head spin? This is not even an exhaustive explanation...
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My IELTS Speaking failure/success
Those of you who follow me on the prohibited network at ira.lutse.ielts have seen my IELTS speaking score from 1 October - a miserable 8, with the score breakdown 8888.
But after a remark, my speaking score was boosted to 8.5, with the score breakdown 9998. This pesky 8 is pronunciation. And no wonder - I don't care about pronunciation.
Serves me right. I should.
I am looking for an American pronunciation coach. Please recommend one in a private message at @iraluts. 💌
PS: I know my IELTS writing students were happy to read "... my IELTS speaking score from 1 October - a miserable 8 ... " not because they wanted to relish my failure, but because "a + adjective + figure" is a beautiful pattern, one that they have, no doubt, used in their writing. And now my IELTS writing students are doubly happy because they've noticed a resumptive modifier. Who needs pronunciation when you have all this beauty in writing ... 💜
Those of you who follow me on the prohibited network at ira.lutse.ielts have seen my IELTS speaking score from 1 October - a miserable 8, with the score breakdown 8888.
But after a remark, my speaking score was boosted to 8.5, with the score breakdown 9998. This pesky 8 is pronunciation. And no wonder - I don't care about pronunciation.
Serves me right. I should.
I am looking for an American pronunciation coach. Please recommend one in a private message at @iraluts. 💌
PS: I know my IELTS writing students were happy to read "... my IELTS speaking score from 1 October - a miserable 8 ... " not because they wanted to relish my failure, but because "a + adjective + figure" is a beautiful pattern, one that they have, no doubt, used in their writing. And now my IELTS writing students are doubly happy because they've noticed a resumptive modifier. Who needs pronunciation when you have all this beauty in writing ... 💜
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Comma or no comma before "which"?
In open plan offices, employers can control the working process more thoroughly, so the workers will not waste their time chatting and doing nothing [?] which leads to enhanced economic performance.
In open plan offices, employers can control the working process more thoroughly, so the workers will not waste their time chatting and doing nothing [?] which leads to enhanced economic performance.
Anonymous Quiz
67%
comma
33%
no comma
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The most beautiful thing you see here is?
"When it comes to knowing thyself, your own opinion doesn’t necessarily align with that of people around you. But who is right? And would it make life better to fathom your true nature?"
"When it comes to knowing thyself, your own opinion doesn’t necessarily align with that of people around you. But who is right? And would it make life better to fathom your true nature?"
Anonymous Quiz
28%
thyself
13%
align
25%
that
34%
fathom
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🦋 A good referencing mistake, one you can learn from 🦋
There are bad mistakes and good mistakes.
Bad mistakes are mistakes you just keep making despite countless corrections. For example, "a big number of people" or "the least amount of money."
Good mistakes are ones you can learn from. Here is a good mistake - a beautiful one - made by a student. It is very subtle, though. Will you even notice it?
📝 "As people’s desire to stay abreast of current affairs is increasing, they can easily do so by exploiting a wide range of internet sources."
The referencing here doesn't work because "they" is in the nominative case, but "people's" is in the possessive case. You can't use a possessive noun as an antecedent for a nominative pronoun.
You might also encounter the term "implied noun." In "people’s desire," the noun "people" is an implied noun, while "desire" is the stated one. Pronouns can only refer to stated nouns.
📝 My fix for the sentence above: "People increasingly want to stay abreast of current affairs, which they can easily do by exploiting a wide range of internet sources."
Many different fixes are possible. Feel free to offer one in the comments.
There are bad mistakes and good mistakes.
Bad mistakes are mistakes you just keep making despite countless corrections. For example, "a big number of people" or "the least amount of money."
Good mistakes are ones you can learn from. Here is a good mistake - a beautiful one - made by a student. It is very subtle, though. Will you even notice it?
📝 "As people’s desire to stay abreast of current affairs is increasing, they can easily do so by exploiting a wide range of internet sources."
The referencing here doesn't work because "they" is in the nominative case, but "people's" is in the possessive case. You can't use a possessive noun as an antecedent for a nominative pronoun.
You might also encounter the term "implied noun." In "people’s desire," the noun "people" is an implied noun, while "desire" is the stated one. Pronouns can only refer to stated nouns.
📝 My fix for the sentence above: "People increasingly want to stay abreast of current affairs, which they can easily do by exploiting a wide range of internet sources."
Many different fixes are possible. Feel free to offer one in the comments.
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🦩 An implied noun referencing mistake II 🦩
Here is another example of an implied noun referencing mistake:
📝 "Irina is wearing a stunning pink skirt. It is her favorite color."
"It" is supposed to refer to the color pink, but in this example "pink" is an adjective, so "it" can't refer to it. And the stated noun is "skirt," which is what "it" refers to, thus creating confusion.
This is "another example" because the first example was given in the previous post - make sure to read it.
You see, it's these kinds of things that make writing very different from speaking. You say something like "Irina is wearing a stunning pink skirt. It is her favorite color," and no one cares - the conversation keeps going. But you write something like this - and the reader notices because it creates confusion.
Do you love writing as much as I do? 💜
Here is another example of an implied noun referencing mistake:
📝 "Irina is wearing a stunning pink skirt. It is her favorite color."
"It" is supposed to refer to the color pink, but in this example "pink" is an adjective, so "it" can't refer to it. And the stated noun is "skirt," which is what "it" refers to, thus creating confusion.
This is "another example" because the first example was given in the previous post - make sure to read it.
You see, it's these kinds of things that make writing very different from speaking. You say something like "Irina is wearing a stunning pink skirt. It is her favorite color," and no one cares - the conversation keeps going. But you write something like this - and the reader notices because it creates confusion.
Do you love writing as much as I do? 💜
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🦊 IELTS score breakdown/remark lifehack 🦊
Use this lifehack to get as much information out of your IELTS score as possible (and/or to bring some entertainment into your dull life).
1. Take the test.
2. Apply for a score breakdown immediately after you get your result.
3. Wait for 5 weeks (or even for 5 weeks and 4 days if you are a daredevil). Then apply for a remark, which you can do within 6 weeks of sitting your test.
4. Apply for a score breakdown again.
This way you will have two score breakdowns on the same answer, i.e. more information. If you apply for a remark immediately after the exam, most likely you will get the score breakdown for the remark only, so you will only have one score breakdown, i.e. less information.
How is this useful? Let's consider my two score breakdowns for speaking from the exam on 1 October: 8888 before the remark and 9998 after the remark. So, I see that one weakness persists - pronunciation. (I am still looking for an American pronunciation coach, btw. 🇺🇸)
This lifehack, apart from giving you more information about your IELTS score, is guaranteed to bring some thrill into your life. Don't I know it.
PS:
- Your score does not go down from a remark. It will either remain unchanged or increase.
- Remarks are done by senior examiners.
- The examiners doing the remarks don't know your original score.
- Score breakdowns are not given by test centers. They are given by BC or IDP - ask me how to get one if you don't know.
Use this lifehack to get as much information out of your IELTS score as possible (and/or to bring some entertainment into your dull life).
1. Take the test.
2. Apply for a score breakdown immediately after you get your result.
3. Wait for 5 weeks (or even for 5 weeks and 4 days if you are a daredevil). Then apply for a remark, which you can do within 6 weeks of sitting your test.
4. Apply for a score breakdown again.
This way you will have two score breakdowns on the same answer, i.e. more information. If you apply for a remark immediately after the exam, most likely you will get the score breakdown for the remark only, so you will only have one score breakdown, i.e. less information.
How is this useful? Let's consider my two score breakdowns for speaking from the exam on 1 October: 8888 before the remark and 9998 after the remark. So, I see that one weakness persists - pronunciation. (I am still looking for an American pronunciation coach, btw. 🇺🇸)
This lifehack, apart from giving you more information about your IELTS score, is guaranteed to bring some thrill into your life. Don't I know it.
PS:
- Your score does not go down from a remark. It will either remain unchanged or increase.
- Remarks are done by senior examiners.
- The examiners doing the remarks don't know your original score.
- Score breakdowns are not given by test centers. They are given by BC or IDP - ask me how to get one if you don't know.
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Saturday morning quiz. Which option continues the beginning of the sentence correctly?
"Both showed a 4% change in 20 years, ..."
"Both showed a 4% change in 20 years, ..."
Anonymous Quiz
37%
... with the figure for violinists decreasing, whereas that for guitarists increasing.
15%
... with the figure for violinists decreasing, whereas that for guitarists increased.
40%
... with the figure for violinists decreasing and that for guitarists increasing.
7%
... with the figure for violinists decreasing, but that for guitarists increased.
📝 Sentence chaos and how to fix it 📝
Look at this sentence from an IELTS essay written by a student.
📝 "Younger people who do community service for free may be instilled with the spirit of community and develop empathy, sensitivity to others' needs, and make choices that benefit everyone, thereby fostering community prosperity."
The source of chaos is the abundance of elements that are not properly connected. What is an element? Different things can be elements, but in this case it's verbs and nouns. I'll underline them for convenience.
"Younger people who do community service for free may be instilled with the spirit of community and develop empathy, sensitivity to others' needs, and make choices that benefit everyone, thereby fostering community prosperity."
1️⃣ Verbs
We have three verbs, one of which is passive and two active. This is not good already. Even worse is the fact that all three are connected with "and." "And" must only be used before the last element (unless you are using a stylistic device called polysyndeton, which, of course, you shouldn't be doing in IELTS).
2️⃣ Nouns
We have two nouns here "develop empathy, sensitivity." The nouns are not connected with a conjunction, which is a crime against nouns if you ask me (unless you are using a stylistic device called asyndeton, which, of course, you shouldn't be doing in IELTS).
My rewrite:
📝 "Younger people who do community service for free will develop empathy and sensitivity to other people's needs, making choices that benefit everyone and thereby fostering community prosperity."
Now all the elements are wonderfully connected.
You will have noticed that I've deleted "be instilled with the spirit of community." It doesn't really contribute much to meaning - no reason to keep it.
Other rewrites? Share in the comments. 📝
Look at this sentence from an IELTS essay written by a student.
📝 "Younger people who do community service for free may be instilled with the spirit of community and develop empathy, sensitivity to others' needs, and make choices that benefit everyone, thereby fostering community prosperity."
The source of chaos is the abundance of elements that are not properly connected. What is an element? Different things can be elements, but in this case it's verbs and nouns. I'll underline them for convenience.
"Younger people who do community service for free may be instilled with the spirit of community and develop empathy, sensitivity to others' needs, and make choices that benefit everyone, thereby fostering community prosperity."
1️⃣ Verbs
We have three verbs, one of which is passive and two active. This is not good already. Even worse is the fact that all three are connected with "and." "And" must only be used before the last element (unless you are using a stylistic device called polysyndeton, which, of course, you shouldn't be doing in IELTS).
2️⃣ Nouns
We have two nouns here "develop empathy, sensitivity." The nouns are not connected with a conjunction, which is a crime against nouns if you ask me (unless you are using a stylistic device called asyndeton, which, of course, you shouldn't be doing in IELTS).
My rewrite:
📝 "Younger people who do community service for free will develop empathy and sensitivity to other people's needs, making choices that benefit everyone and thereby fostering community prosperity."
Now all the elements are wonderfully connected.
You will have noticed that I've deleted "be instilled with the spirit of community." It doesn't really contribute much to meaning - no reason to keep it.
Other rewrites? Share in the comments. 📝
🦋 Irina writing an IELTS essay ....
Irina writing an IELTS essay be like...
1️⃣ "These two factors will have a detrimental impact on society."
No, that's just boring.
2️⃣ "The scale of the danger from both of these factors is such that it might lead to an outcome as atrocious as complete social disintegration."
Is it over the top? Share in the comments. 😬
PS: What I really wanted to use is "social disintegration" because I read it yesterday and wanted to recycle immediately.
Irina writing an IELTS essay be like...
1️⃣ "These two factors will have a detrimental impact on society."
No, that's just boring.
2️⃣ "The scale of the danger from both of these factors is such that it might lead to an outcome as atrocious as complete social disintegration."
Is it over the top? Share in the comments. 😬
PS: What I really wanted to use is "social disintegration" because I read it yesterday and wanted to recycle immediately.
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🦩 Simple or complex? 🦩
If sometimes you think it might be cool to be Irina Lutsenko, consider the dilemmas that keep me awake at night. Like this one.
Is this sentence simple or complex?❓
"North America, in the meantime, ranked third, albeit with a considerably lower quantity of 24.7 million tons."
My colleagues, whose level is C3 or higher, disagree. ChatGPT first gave one answer, but then took it back after a clarifying question and said the opposite thing.
Here is the deal.
The answer hinges on whether "albeit with a considerably lower quantity of 24.7 million tons" is a clause. I don't think it is because it doesn't have a subject and a verb.
Those who say it is a clause argue that it is a reduced one because the subject and the verb are implied, e.g. "it ranked / it did so." But I don't think this holds up as "albeit" doesn't take a subject and a verb in that "albeit it did so with a considerably lower quantity" is impossible. Therefore, it cannot be a reduced clause or a clause at all.
This makes the sentence above a simple one. A beautiful, sophisticated, high-level one, but still a simple one.
Of course, none of this has any practical applications (probably). It's just my idea of fun.
So, where do you stand on this - is the sentence simple or complex? Why?
If sometimes you think it might be cool to be Irina Lutsenko, consider the dilemmas that keep me awake at night. Like this one.
Is this sentence simple or complex?❓
"North America, in the meantime, ranked third, albeit with a considerably lower quantity of 24.7 million tons."
My colleagues, whose level is C3 or higher, disagree. ChatGPT first gave one answer, but then took it back after a clarifying question and said the opposite thing.
Here is the deal.
The answer hinges on whether "albeit with a considerably lower quantity of 24.7 million tons" is a clause. I don't think it is because it doesn't have a subject and a verb.
Those who say it is a clause argue that it is a reduced one because the subject and the verb are implied, e.g. "it ranked / it did so." But I don't think this holds up as "albeit" doesn't take a subject and a verb in that "albeit it did so with a considerably lower quantity" is impossible. Therefore, it cannot be a reduced clause or a clause at all.
This makes the sentence above a simple one. A beautiful, sophisticated, high-level one, but still a simple one.
Of course, none of this has any practical applications (probably). It's just my idea of fun.
So, where do you stand on this - is the sentence simple or complex? Why?
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IELTS Writing Task 1 - Grammar 9?
I think getting 9 for grammar is harder for Task 1 than for Task 2 because it's harder to show a wide range. Do you think this answer (body paragraphs only) deserves 9 for grammar?
Written by a student - the wonderful Alisher Soliev.
"When it comes to consumption, Europe led the way with 96.1kg per person, followed distantly by North America, where 57.9kg was consumed. The figures for the next two places in the table, by comparison, were nowhere near as high: Asia as well as South and Central America consumed similar amounts, at 25.8 and 23.6 kilograms per person respectively. In Africa, the consumption rate was the lowest, standing at a mere 14.1kg - a figure that was just over a tenth of the leader's figure.
As far as the production of this vegetable is concerned, Europe harvested 126.3 million tons and was placed after Asia, which produced about 5 million tonnes more compared to Europe. North America, in the meantime, ranked third, albeit with a considerably lower quantity of 24.7 million tonnes. Of particular note is the fact that Africa didn't rank last, as it did in the former table, with the production quantity of 16.4 million tonnes; it was, in fact, South and Central America that grew only 15.6 million tonnes of potatoes."
Here is the Band 9 denoscription for grammar:
- A wide range of structures within the scope of the task is used with full flexibility and control.
- Punctuation and grammar are used appropriately throughout.
- Minor errors are extremely rare and have minimal impact on communication.
Share in the comments. 🦋
I think getting 9 for grammar is harder for Task 1 than for Task 2 because it's harder to show a wide range. Do you think this answer (body paragraphs only) deserves 9 for grammar?
Written by a student - the wonderful Alisher Soliev.
"When it comes to consumption, Europe led the way with 96.1kg per person, followed distantly by North America, where 57.9kg was consumed. The figures for the next two places in the table, by comparison, were nowhere near as high: Asia as well as South and Central America consumed similar amounts, at 25.8 and 23.6 kilograms per person respectively. In Africa, the consumption rate was the lowest, standing at a mere 14.1kg - a figure that was just over a tenth of the leader's figure.
As far as the production of this vegetable is concerned, Europe harvested 126.3 million tons and was placed after Asia, which produced about 5 million tonnes more compared to Europe. North America, in the meantime, ranked third, albeit with a considerably lower quantity of 24.7 million tonnes. Of particular note is the fact that Africa didn't rank last, as it did in the former table, with the production quantity of 16.4 million tonnes; it was, in fact, South and Central America that grew only 15.6 million tonnes of potatoes."
Here is the Band 9 denoscription for grammar:
- A wide range of structures within the scope of the task is used with full flexibility and control.
- Punctuation and grammar are used appropriately throughout.
- Minor errors are extremely rare and have minimal impact on communication.
Share in the comments. 🦋
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📊 Avoid repetitions with ellipsis in IELTS Writing Task 1 📊
Ellipsis is the omission of a word that can be understood from the structure of the sentence.
For example: Instead of "... this early application cycle has proven to be one of the most competitive cycles in history... ," we can write "... has proven to be one of the most competitive in history." No need to repeat "cycle."
Ellipsis is a far superior way of avoiding repetitions than synonyms. And it comes in especially handy with words that don't have a lot of synonyms, which is often the case in IELTS Writing Task 1.
Take a look at this paragraph from an article on Forbes, find three more examples of ellipsis, and share in the comments.
📝 "For other elite universities, this early application cycle has proven to be one of the most competitive in history, following a trend of record-breaking years. Yale announced that they have accepted 709 of their 7,856 applicants, amounting to a 9.02% acceptance rate — the lowest in over 20 years, topping the precedent set last cycle. While Columbia did not announce its official acceptance rates, the university noted that their applicant pool increased by 5% over last year’s, an increase which will likely result in a smaller percentage of admitted students. Likewise, the University of Pennsylvania received over 8,500 applications, up from 8,000 in the last cycle. Neither Penn nor Yale have shared demographic data."
PS: There are all sorts of IELTS Writing Task 1 beauty in this paragraph. What else did you spot?
Source:
https://www.forbes.com/sites/christopherrim/2023/12/15/harvard-announces-increases-in-early-admissions-acceptance-rates-while-yales-hit-historic-lows/?sh=3dff46333f75
Ellipsis is the omission of a word that can be understood from the structure of the sentence.
For example: Instead of "... this early application cycle has proven to be one of the most competitive cycles in history... ," we can write "... has proven to be one of the most competitive in history." No need to repeat "cycle."
Ellipsis is a far superior way of avoiding repetitions than synonyms. And it comes in especially handy with words that don't have a lot of synonyms, which is often the case in IELTS Writing Task 1.
Take a look at this paragraph from an article on Forbes, find three more examples of ellipsis, and share in the comments.
📝 "For other elite universities, this early application cycle has proven to be one of the most competitive in history, following a trend of record-breaking years. Yale announced that they have accepted 709 of their 7,856 applicants, amounting to a 9.02% acceptance rate — the lowest in over 20 years, topping the precedent set last cycle. While Columbia did not announce its official acceptance rates, the university noted that their applicant pool increased by 5% over last year’s, an increase which will likely result in a smaller percentage of admitted students. Likewise, the University of Pennsylvania received over 8,500 applications, up from 8,000 in the last cycle. Neither Penn nor Yale have shared demographic data."
PS: There are all sorts of IELTS Writing Task 1 beauty in this paragraph. What else did you spot?
Source:
https://www.forbes.com/sites/christopherrim/2023/12/15/harvard-announces-increases-in-early-admissions-acceptance-rates-while-yales-hit-historic-lows/?sh=3dff46333f75
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🦩 Paraphrasing the IELTS essay topic 🦩
📝 Topic: "The most important aim of science should be to improve people's lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?"
📝 Here are two sentences written by a student:
1. It has been posited that the paramount objective of science should be the enhancement of human lives. (Introduction)
2. I staunchly contend that the unequivocal aspiration of science is the enhancement of human life. (Conclusion)
Even though the topic is technically paraphrased, the paraphrase is entirely lexical and looks like a translation from "simple" to "fancy" rather than skillful use of language.
It's a good idea to add some more paraphrasing techniques:
1️⃣ Change the subject of the sentence. Make "science" the subject of the sentence. If you do, you will get a different sentence structure, which is a plus.
2️⃣ Change the part of speech. E.g. science - scientific, important - importance, aim - be aimed. This will also entail changes in the sentence structure and, hopefully, allow you to use even more good language.
3️⃣ Put some ideas into separate clauses or even sentences. E.g. "There is some debate as to what the most important aim of science should be, with some people arguing it is the improvement of people's lives ... ."
Now combine one or all of these techniques with lexical paraphrasing and offer your version in the comments. 📝
📝 Topic: "The most important aim of science should be to improve people's lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?"
📝 Here are two sentences written by a student:
1. It has been posited that the paramount objective of science should be the enhancement of human lives. (Introduction)
2. I staunchly contend that the unequivocal aspiration of science is the enhancement of human life. (Conclusion)
Even though the topic is technically paraphrased, the paraphrase is entirely lexical and looks like a translation from "simple" to "fancy" rather than skillful use of language.
It's a good idea to add some more paraphrasing techniques:
1️⃣ Change the subject of the sentence. Make "science" the subject of the sentence. If you do, you will get a different sentence structure, which is a plus.
2️⃣ Change the part of speech. E.g. science - scientific, important - importance, aim - be aimed. This will also entail changes in the sentence structure and, hopefully, allow you to use even more good language.
3️⃣ Put some ideas into separate clauses or even sentences. E.g. "There is some debate as to what the most important aim of science should be, with some people arguing it is the improvement of people's lives ... ."
Now combine one or all of these techniques with lexical paraphrasing and offer your version in the comments. 📝
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One lesser known fact about me is I have a tradition - I run on 1 January. 🏃♀
Inspired by a student, I started in 2017 and have kept it ever since.
Join me tomorrow. Do any activity - run, ski, swim - wherever you are. Share your distance and your location in the comments!
Let's start the year strong! 💪
Inspired by a student, I started in 2017 and have kept it ever since.
Join me tomorrow. Do any activity - run, ski, swim - wherever you are. Share your distance and your location in the comments!
Let's start the year strong! 💪
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❄ My 2023 ❄
I have a friend who keeps telling me, "Irina, you share your amazing achievements on social media all the time. Aren't you afraid people will hate you?"
I am not afraid, but I do realize some people will indeed hate me for that. I also know there are those who are inspired by that. If you are too, keep reading. If I can do this, so too can you - there is nothing fundamentally unique or out of reach about any of the amazing things I do.
The highlights of my 2023:
❄ I won yet another grant - ELEX - and attended TESOL 2023 in Portland, Oregon. I hadn't been to the US since my 💎 year, so I missed it and just had to go again. 🇺🇲
❄ Inspired by the experience, I submitted three proposals to speak at TESOL 2024 - and one got accepted! I'll present at the biggest conference in the ELT industry in March in Florida! 🇺🇲
❄ Inspired by the success, I submitted another proposal and won yet another grant - this time for others. I got a Creative Writing course from RELO with an American teacher for 20 wonderful people in my community!
❄ Inspired by Alisher Soliev, I got my second IELTS 9 and third 8.5 for writing. 💜
❄ Started writing IELTS answers weekly and continued teaching IELTS writing relying almost exclusively on my own model answers. And Anna Skopina draws beautiful visuals for the tasks. So our writing courses have a uniquely distinct style - in terms of both the texts and the images.
❄ Spoke at three major ELT conferences in Russia: Trendy St Pete in St Pete, Trendy Evolution in Moscow, and YarConf23 in Yaroslavl. Continued to spread my passion for writing.
❄ Met Jordan Peterson the second time!
❄ Took my own Creative Writing project to the next level - launched a book discussion club based on our stories "Small Stories Big Ideas." Superbly hosted by the wonderful Vera Averyanova. To be repeated in 2024 - stay tuned.
❄ ... and then Evgenia Karabatova took my project to the absolutely unimaginable (until now) but highly inspiring level - she wrote a real novel, 30,000 words long!!! The novel will be featured in the new season of "Small Stories Big Ideas."
❄ ... and Veronika Shirobokova made a huge contribution to my creative writing community too by running an awesome poetry writing mini-course.
❄ Increased my running distances significantly: I now run three times a week, a total of 25 km, on average. 🏃♀
Of course, I couldn't have done so much without the people mentioned and many others helping behind the scenes. My unending gratitude to every single person who contributed to the activities above. 💜
And also huge thanks to those of you who, rather than hating me, are inspired by me. 💜
I have a friend who keeps telling me, "Irina, you share your amazing achievements on social media all the time. Aren't you afraid people will hate you?"
I am not afraid, but I do realize some people will indeed hate me for that. I also know there are those who are inspired by that. If you are too, keep reading. If I can do this, so too can you - there is nothing fundamentally unique or out of reach about any of the amazing things I do.
The highlights of my 2023:
❄ I won yet another grant - ELEX - and attended TESOL 2023 in Portland, Oregon. I hadn't been to the US since my 💎 year, so I missed it and just had to go again. 🇺🇲
❄ Inspired by the experience, I submitted three proposals to speak at TESOL 2024 - and one got accepted! I'll present at the biggest conference in the ELT industry in March in Florida! 🇺🇲
❄ Inspired by the success, I submitted another proposal and won yet another grant - this time for others. I got a Creative Writing course from RELO with an American teacher for 20 wonderful people in my community!
❄ Inspired by Alisher Soliev, I got my second IELTS 9 and third 8.5 for writing. 💜
❄ Started writing IELTS answers weekly and continued teaching IELTS writing relying almost exclusively on my own model answers. And Anna Skopina draws beautiful visuals for the tasks. So our writing courses have a uniquely distinct style - in terms of both the texts and the images.
❄ Spoke at three major ELT conferences in Russia: Trendy St Pete in St Pete, Trendy Evolution in Moscow, and YarConf23 in Yaroslavl. Continued to spread my passion for writing.
❄ Met Jordan Peterson the second time!
❄ Took my own Creative Writing project to the next level - launched a book discussion club based on our stories "Small Stories Big Ideas." Superbly hosted by the wonderful Vera Averyanova. To be repeated in 2024 - stay tuned.
❄ ... and then Evgenia Karabatova took my project to the absolutely unimaginable (until now) but highly inspiring level - she wrote a real novel, 30,000 words long!!! The novel will be featured in the new season of "Small Stories Big Ideas."
❄ ... and Veronika Shirobokova made a huge contribution to my creative writing community too by running an awesome poetry writing mini-course.
❄ Increased my running distances significantly: I now run three times a week, a total of 25 km, on average. 🏃♀
Of course, I couldn't have done so much without the people mentioned and many others helping behind the scenes. My unending gratitude to every single person who contributed to the activities above. 💜
And also huge thanks to those of you who, rather than hating me, are inspired by me. 💜
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🦋 "Irina, what is your writing routine?" A student asked. 🦋
In short: between 9 and 9:30 am on work days and any time in the morning on Sunday.
I prefer to write in the morning because my mind is fresh. But I do not write exclusively in the morning. I can write any time if I have a deadline or if I have a thought that I absolutely have to put down on paper.
How did I come up with this routine? It's easy. I am a creature of schedule. So I looked at my weekly schedule and identified the time that is reliably free. I start teaching at 10 am. I can't start writing immediately after I wake up. And I need some time before my first class. This makes the slot from 9 to 9:30 my window of opportunity.
If you need a writing routine, the trick is not to follow mine, but to come up with your own. Do you think better in the morning or in the evening? When is the time you can be reliably free? Do you need to be alone to write? If so, when is that time in your life?
Sometimes breaking a routine helps too. In summer, I would take my "typewriter" (that's what I call my tablet with a detachable keyboard) and go to write in a cafe in the evening. These times were productive for me too because of the break from the routine.
Do you have a writing routine? How did you find or create it? 🦋
In short: between 9 and 9:30 am on work days and any time in the morning on Sunday.
I prefer to write in the morning because my mind is fresh. But I do not write exclusively in the morning. I can write any time if I have a deadline or if I have a thought that I absolutely have to put down on paper.
How did I come up with this routine? It's easy. I am a creature of schedule. So I looked at my weekly schedule and identified the time that is reliably free. I start teaching at 10 am. I can't start writing immediately after I wake up. And I need some time before my first class. This makes the slot from 9 to 9:30 my window of opportunity.
If you need a writing routine, the trick is not to follow mine, but to come up with your own. Do you think better in the morning or in the evening? When is the time you can be reliably free? Do you need to be alone to write? If so, when is that time in your life?
Sometimes breaking a routine helps too. In summer, I would take my "typewriter" (that's what I call my tablet with a detachable keyboard) and go to write in a cafe in the evening. These times were productive for me too because of the break from the routine.
Do you have a writing routine? How did you find or create it? 🦋
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"In 2013, a team from Unilever reported that the extent of facial photoageing in people in their 60s was correlated with the risk of cardiovascular disease, a classic health condition of older age." [a classic health condition of older age] is?
"In 2013, a team from Unilever reported that the extent of facial photoageing in people in their 60s was correlated with the risk of cardiovascular disease, a classic health condition of older age." [a classic health condition of older age] is?
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