Tiny words and cool sentences for writing 💡

Even though some sesquipedalian words are certainly pulchritudinous, I am a huge fan of tiny and deceptively familiar words, like "so" or "if" or "one." These words can sometimes be harder to use than sesquipedalian ones.

Here are seven sentences from my recent quizzes. Check yourself one more time. Do you remember all these words and phrases? Do you understand the meanings? More importantly, do you share my love for such tiny words?

1️⃣ "Another possible, if more controversial, explanation for the benefits of blue spaces goes back much deeper into our evolutionary past."

2️⃣ "Another big question is one being voiced by many people excited by semaglutide's widespread effects: could everyone benefit from it in some way?"

3️⃣ "We tend to be optimistic about our own lives. We are also optimistic, although less so, about our family and friends."

4️⃣ "The behaviour of simple animals like fruit flies is usually assumed to be highly deterministic, involving reflexive responses to external stimuli. In fact, it is anything but."

5️⃣ "But as the technology evolved, so too did an extraordinary idea."

6️⃣ "... if we can formalise enough proofs so Als can access them, we could train these systems such that they can themselves generate proofs more quickly, and maybe even more effectively, than we can."

7️⃣ "The scientists reasoned that, for a given statement to count as common sense, the majority of people would have to agree that it was, and individuals would also need to be aware that other people viewed it as such."

The source of all these sentences is the "New Scientist" magazine. I have a whole writing course based on articles from this magazine. The patterns above are just a tiny glimpse of what we do in this course. Click to find out more and 💌 @iraluts.

So, how did you do? Do you know all these patterns? More importantly, do you love them?

IELTS Writing Task 2: Staying on Topic 💡

As usual, I won't hand you the answer on a silver platter. I'll invite you to think first.

Below are two short excepts with the same key argument. Which one seems on topic and which one seems off topic? Why?

Topic: "Many students find it harder to study when they are at university or college than when they were at school. Why is this? What can be done to solve the problem?"

1️⃣
"The second reason is that students often find part-time jobs when they are at university. In many countries, tertiary education is not free, and tuition fees are exorbitant, which means students have to start working very early to put themselves through college. In countries where higher education itself is free, students still have to get jobs to cover their living costs as the stipends or financial aid are typically not high enough to cover rent, food, and entertainment."

2️⃣
"The second reason is that students often find part-time jobs when they are at university. Whether they do so to cover tuition fees or to earn some pocket money, the result is that they fall behind on their studies as they do not have the time to do what is required, for example, to attend lectures, to complete the background reading, or to do the proper research for their writing assignments. As a consequence, the amount of material they have to cover piles up each week, making it harder to catch up and to progress."

See how the same key argument can go in different directions?

The first piece goes off topic because it focuses on money. The second piece stays on topic because it focuses on studies. 💡

To help yourself stay on topic, brainstorm for some things typically associated with the topic. What do people do when they study at university? They go to lectures, they read text books, they do writing assignments etc. Connect your key argument to these things.

PS: Yes, I know "pile up" and "catch up" are too informal, but my brain is not braining this morning. What would you use instead?

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IELTS Writing Task 2: Repetition or development? 🐼

Repeating rather than developing an idea is a Task Response weakness I talk about on a regular basis in my IELTS classes.

And, as usual, to vividly illustrate this weakness, I write two excerpts on the same topic. Here is an example. Which excerpt repeats the ideas and which one develops them? ❓

Topic: "The numbers of plants and animals is decreasing in most countries. Why is this happening? What can be done about it?"

1️⃣
"Both reasons for this development stem from human activities. The first one is that as the population of the planet grows, people increasingly encroach on territories where wildlife lives. They do so because they have to invade plant and animal habitats, and since the number of people is high, it, in essence, replaces biodiversity. After intruding into natural environments, people cause flora and fauna to die out due to human intervention."

2️⃣
"Both reasons for this development stem from human activities. The first one is that as the population of the planet grows, people increasingly encroach on territories where wildlife lives. They do so for a range of purposes, from construction and expansion of cities to clearing the land for farming and agriculture. These activities either obliterate flora and fauna entirely or cause them to move to new habitats, where they might not necessarily survive."

KEY: The first excerpt repeats the same idea over and over again—in different words. The second one develops it.

Don't let paraphrasing or fancy language fool you—or don't fool yourself by thinking that if you've written something complex, you've developed your ideas.

"Development" means adding new bits of information—examples, comparisons, causes, effects, definitions, you name it—in every clause or sentence so that the paragraph moves forward. 🐼

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Attaching an example of a typical worksheet in my "Writing with New Scientist" course.

Each worksheet is different. This one is 13 pages long (!!!!!) and contains an #IELTS Writing Task 1 process task. 🎀

My unique "Writing with New Scientist" course is a solid, thorough writing course very rich in language and cohesion. It's designed to take your writing to the next level. A perfect pre- or post-IELTS or -CPE course.

✏️ Worksheet: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1JJVxEWgLj8DFA9qb43ZLKUjReUNXrzNYpvB4D3eWhb0/edit?tab=t.0

✏️ Link to the magazine with the article.

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IELTS Writing Task 1: writing about exceptions 📊

If you've seen enough #IELTS tasks, you'll know that most of them contain exceptions—one category that is different.

For example, a line graph where three lines go down, but one goes up. Or a bar chart about men and women where the figure for men is higher in all the groups, but in one the figure for women is higher. Things like that.

Here are some phrases you can use to talk about exceptions in IELTS Writing Task 1:

1️⃣ except / with the exception of ...

2️⃣ ... was the only (category) to have witnessed a decrease

3️⃣ all (categories) but (one) saw growth

4️⃣ (This country), however, bucked the trend ...

5️⃣ Unlike the rest (of the categories), (this one) saw ...

6️⃣ (This category) stands out because ...

To practice the patterns above, write a sentence with one of them about the task in the picture. Use the "spoiler" feature so that other subscribers don't see your sentence immediately and have a chance to practice too.

And if you can think of more phrases for exceptions, share in the comments. ❤️

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💡 Insights about writing college applications 💡

Our awesome course "Writing College Applications" with our awesome American instructor is in full swing. 🇺🇸

Here are some super-useful brainstorming techniques that will help you find what to write about in your application.

1️⃣ Values
- List your values for 10 minutes.
- Go through and identify 5-7 values you’d really like to share.
- For each of these, come up with 1-2 life experiences you can use to demonstrate these values.

2️⃣ Who are you?
- Take 10 minutes to list nouns/noun phrases to describe you.
- Try to move beyond the obvious options (family relations, nationality, job, etc.).
- Identify the top 3 you want to highlight.
- Identify 3 you’re trying to build up and reflect on how you’re trying to build that in your life.

3️⃣ Timeline
- Create a timeline of the last 3-4 years of your life.
- Include all of the most important/informative events of each year.
- Pull out a few key events and list the values that these events demonstrate.

Once you’ve identified what you would like to highlight, go back and compare what you want to show with what you need to show. Now you're all set to write.

Even though our course is about writing college applications, these techniques are super-useful for many kinds of writing that require self-presentation.

💡 More insights from this course:

- https://news.1rj.ru/str/irinalutsenko/469

- https://news.1rj.ru/str/irinalutsenko/464

IELTS Writing Task 1: Commas with relative clauses in maps 🏝

Commas with relative clauses are one of the most common mistakes I have to correct. Most grammar books will tell you: "If the information is essential (necessary etc), you don't need commas. If the information is not essential (necessary etc), you need commas."

And then students spend valuable time racking their brains whether the information is essential—and then make mistakes anyway.

I explain this topic in a different way: It all boils down to whether there is one of something or more than one of something.

1️⃣ "The entrance, which was located in the western wing, was renovated." = There is only one entrance in the building. The relative clause provides a side comment.

2️⃣ "The entrance which was located in the western wing was renovated." = There are several entrances. Without the specification in the relative clause, the reader won't understand what entrance I mean.

To help you better understand this, here is an exercise. The two excerpts about the task above contain relative clauses. Do you need the commas? ❓

1️⃣ The first lava flow took place on 6 May and affected the western part of the town. Before the eruption there used to be a town square with houses around it. The whole square was buried under lava. The lava, however, did not reach the coastal line, so the houses [1] which were located along it were untouched. Another construction that was not destroyed was the castle [2] which was located in the central part of the town.

2️⃣ The eruption resulted in two large lava flows, one on 6 May and one on 12 May, affecting the western and eastern parts respectively. The first flow [3] which reached much of the coastal line buried the square and most of the buildings, with the only ones remaining intact being the castle and a few right on the coast. The flow [4] which reached the town six days later did not cause structural damage to any infrastructure.

KEY

[1] No comma_
[2] A comma__
[3] Commas__
[4] No commas

PS: My IELTS Task 1 pictures, including this one, are real tasks. They look oh so cute because they are drawn by my wonderful colleague Anna Skopina. 🏝

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How to read in order to write 💡

How? By paying attention to what you are reading and purposefully choosing what to steal for your writing.

In my "Writing Incubator" workshop yesterday, 20 people came together to steal and practice a bunch of patterns for writing. Here is just a tiny glimpse (with 22 pages of content, I had trouble choosing).

IELTS track (stolen from "New Scientist")

1. when combined (reduced clause)

Veronika Shirobokova: There are numerous ways to uplift one's mood, but vigorous exercise, when combined with groovy music, offers the best results.

2. rather than + -ing

Aleksandra: If you get a score lower than you expected, rather than sulking and feeling miserable, try to perceive this experience as a form of practice instead.

3. If so: clausal substitution

Irina Sidorkina: Are you struggling to come up with ideas for your essay? If so, it's high time you started reading good stuff—Irina keeps advising to.

CPE, social media track (stolen from "The Guardian")

1. Brackets, a self-answering question

nadya: If you want to get IELTS 9 (who doesn't?), then you need to pull yourself together and stop making excuses. sorry.

Lena Look: If you want to get IELTS 9 (who doesn't ?), then you need to enroll on Irina Lutsenko's course and follow her instructions ))))

2. Polysyndeton (overuse of a conjunction)

Aysel: So, you sit down to write an essay. You are determined. You are focused. But then, one by one, you face a whole host of distractions—kids and cooking and the boiling kettle and pets fighting and floors creaking.

Tatiana Zemlerub: So, you sit down to write an essay. You are determined. You are focused. But then, one by one, you face a whole host of distractions—kids and cooking and cats and students and dirty floors and Carrie Bradshow.

3. Asyndeton (omission of a conjunction)

Anastasia B: So you sit down to write your essay. You're determined. You're focused. But then, one by one, you're faced with a series of distractions—a dog with puppies on the street, a stranger walking past, a neighbor backing out of his garage.

💡 Your turn. Finish the sentences frames with your own ideas:

1️⃣ If you get a score lower than you expected, rather than ... ing,

2️⃣ Are you struggling to come up with ideas for your essay? If so, ...

3️⃣ If you want to get IELTS 9 (who doesn't?), then ...

4️⃣ So, you sit down to write an essay. You are determined. You are focused. But then, one by one, you face a whole host of distractions— ...

🎵 IELTS Writing Task 2: What can the arts tell us about life that science cannot? 🎵

This is one of the most challenging—and therefore interesting—topics I’ve ever had to write an IELTS essay on. That’s why I can’t help sharing.

Topic: “In today’s world of advanced science and technology, many still greatly value artists such as musicians, painters and writers. What can the arts tell us about life that science cannot?”

"Arts and sciences are often viewed in opposition to each other. Some people even argue that since arts—unlike science—do not deal with objective facts, they do not help us gain a deeper understanding of life. They do, however, give us insights into what science does not or cannot explain.

First and foremost, arts provide individual perspectives on and personal reactions to facts. While science aims to discover and describe the laws that govern our world, arts aim to communicate how these laws affect or are perceived by a specific person. For example, a scientific text can describe how malignant cells spread in a cancerous tumor, but it is a creative text that will give a first-hand account of what the patient feels upon learning the news they have cancer or of how they handle combating the disease. Thus, in a sense, arts allow one individual to access many different experiences, ones the individual might ever not encounter in their real life.

Another important function arts serve is explaining—or at least attempting to explain—some elusive concepts that science has thus far been unable to. “Soul” is a good case in point. As yet, scientists haven’t been able to detect it, with some even arguing that there is no such entity as a soul. Yet, most of us intuitively understand that we have one—an intangible combination of our feelings and thoughts. This is where arts come into play. Most people report that some works of art, music or visual arts in particular, speak to their soul in some unfathomable way. Other art forms, such as literature or cinematography, enable the creators to explore what a soul is by placing the characters of the narrative in testing life situations. More examples of similarly nebulous notions would be love or the meaning of life. Even when arts, like science, cannot provide a precise and coherent explanation of a certain phenomenon, audiences still relate not only to the topics explored but also to the search for explanations.

To conclude, dealing with the subjective and the ephemeral, arts play an important role in helping us make sense of the lesser-understood aspects of life. Given that such aspects are inherent in our human experience, is it any wonder that arts are as popular as ever?"

By Irina Lutsenko 🎵

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How to order data and ideas in IELTS writing (and elsewhere) 📊

If you want to arrive at a coherent text that is easy to follow, you can't just write whatever you want in any order you want (bummer, I know).

To organize information in a way that makes processing it easier for the reader, follow the principles below. Use them to organize your IELTS answer, particularly IELTS Writing Task 1, and any text that involves reporting facts and communicating objective information.

1️⃣ Chronological order: from beginning to end, from the past to the present to the future, from young to old. (This is a really strong one because we think chronologically.)

2️⃣ From the largest to the smallest or from the smallest to the largest.

3️⃣ From the least important to the most important and the other way around. (This can sound somewhat vague. I'll write a special post about this principle.)

4️⃣ From general to specific (or from specific to general—but this is less likely to be used in IELTS).

5️⃣ Order of familiarity: from familiar to unfamiliar, from the most familiar to the least familiar. ("Familiar" means familiar to the reader!)

6️⃣ Spatial, if applicable: from left to right, clockwise, from the entrance to the far end of the room (for example, in IELTS map/floor plan tasks).

In IELTS terms, these principles will fall under "Coherence and Cohesion" and, more specifically, "Progression." And perhaps "Task Achievement" too because well-organized reporting improves clarity.

These ways to order ideas will make your writing easier to follow. For example, compare the texts below. Which one is easier to read? Which principle is broken in the less effective piece? ❓

Example 1:

1. Make sure to proofread and edit your essay. But before you do, begin by brainstorming for ideas and lexical items. Then write the first draft. It's a good idea to take notes during the brainstorming stage.

2. Begin by brainstorming for ideas and lexical items on the topic. Make sure to take notes during the brainstorming stage. Then write your first draft. Finally, proofread and edit your essay several times if needed.

Example 2:

1. The highest level is observed in Japan, at 120. In Brazil, the level is only 60, while Canada is in second place with 100.

2. The highest level is observed in Japan, at 120. Canada is in second place, with 100. Meanwhile, the level in Brazil is fairly low—60.

In longer texts, these principles are even more important because there is more information for the reader to process. Don't break these principles unless you have a good reason.

Breaking them, on the other hand, is great in more creative genres—precisely because it's unusual to organize information differently. For example, the chronological principle is often broken in novels or movies to keep the reader engaged and intrigued. But this is not the goal you want to achieve in IELTS.

Have I missed some organizational principles? Share in the comments. 📝

Order of ideas: order of importance 1️⃣2️⃣3️⃣

In a very long and very boring post above, I've outlined some principles to order ideas effectively. The third principle—writing ideas in order of importance—might seem bit vague, but in reality it isn’t. So, here is another long and boring post.

Let's look at some examples from #IELTS Writing Task 1 and Task 2 (but the principles are universal).

IELTS Writing Task 1

Let's say you are describing this map: https://news.1rj.ru/str/irinalutsenko/519. Which order sounds better?

1️⃣ The eruption destroyed much of the residential infrastructure as the lava flows buired many residential buildings. The port, despite remaining intact, ceased operations. What did not suffer any damage was the castle.

2️⃣ The eruption did not damage the castle. The port was not damaged either, but it ceased operations. Finally, what suffered the most was residential buildings, many of which were buried under lava.

The first one goes from to "most damaged" to "undamaged." The second one goes from "undamaged" to "most damaged."

The first denoscription reads better for two reasons: 1. We associate volcano eruptions with damage, so it's better to start from damage. 2. We typically value human lives and safety more than buildings. The destruction of residential infrastructure implies potential danger to humans, hence its more significant importance.

IELTS Writing Task 2

Let's say you have an essay about machines being more intelligent than humans. Here are two versions of an imaginary mini-paragraph about the potential dangers.

1️⃣ One of the possible dangers of AI is that it will at one point get out of control and decide to harm or even obliterate humans. Another danger is that many people will lose jobs as these will be performed by machines. Finally, creative content will be much less interesting or original because it will be written by AI, which relies heavily on tropes and templates.

2️⃣ One possible downside is that creative content will be much less interesting or original in the AI era because AI relies heavily on tropes and templates. Another negative effect might be that many people will lose jobs as these will be performed by machines. The biggest possible danger, however, is that AI might get out of control and decide to harm or even obliterate humans.

The first one goes from "less likely but more dramatic" to "more likely but less dramatic" and the second one goes the other way around.

The second one is better. First, why make the reader worry right off the bat about something that is unlikely to happen, at least in the near future? Second, if machines do indeed obliterate all of us, then the other downsides are no longer important—-we won't care about jobs and art if we don't exist.

To conclude, the order of ideas matters. Order wisely.

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My eye surgery as an IELTS Writing Task 1 process denoscription 👁👁

Those of you who’ve known me for a while, or who’ve seen old photos of me, know that I used to wear glasses. I no longer do because I got eye surgery – and wrote about it as an #IELTS Writing Task 1 answer.

Even though there is no real IELTS task like this, there are still lots of things you can borrow from my answer.

"The process began from a full diagnostic test. Based on the results of the test, the ophthalmologist concluded that LASIK – the type of surgery I had intended to get – was not an option for me due to thin corneas and advised that I get PRK (photorefractive keratectomy) instead. This type of surgery has a longer and more painful recovery period. However, having weighed all the pros and cons, I decided to go through with it.

On the day of the surgery, I first had consultations with an ophthalmologist and an anesthesiologist, who walked me through the process. The surgery took place after that and consisted of several steps.

In the first step, a nurse put numbing drops in my eyes. After the anesthesia had taken effect, she walked me into the operating room and helped me lie on the treatment couch. In the next step, the surgeon placed an eyelid holder, also called an eye speculum, on my right eye to prevent it from blinking. He then positioned the laser over my face and shone a green light into my eye for several minutes. This was followed by the actual laser treatment, which lasted for several seconds and was barely noticeable. The same operation was then performed on my left eye. The final step was a postoperative assessment, after which I was discharged.

In the following days, I experienced severe discomfort and itching, which began to gradually decrease in intensity on the third day but lingered for about three more days. Another inconvenience during this period was having to go to the clinic for assessment every day – a requirement that was burdensome due to pain and excessive tearing.

Overall, while the surgery itself was short and painless, the recovery wasn't. The hellish recovery notwithstanding, I am glad I got the surgery because a life without glasses is more convenient."

And during my recovery, since I couldn’t look at screens, I spent my days listening to lectures by well-established writers. I then implemented some ideas in my Creative Writing Club. Silver lining.

What are some things you can borrow? And did you notice the summative modifier? Share in the comments. 💡

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